Feedback (5 comments)

You've taken a song and adapted it into a 500-word story. So did your classmates. Now I want you to read what your fellow writers came up with. We'll spend Wednesday (4/14) in the writing lab. I want you to post at least five (5) comments.

I want this to be meaningful feedback. Here's the format:

• What I noticed (what you were trying to do)
  
• Something I liked (what worked)
  
• A suggestion (what didn't work)
  

You won't get points for comments like this:
"That was really good. I liked it. Good job."

Due Sunday, 4/18